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Yesterday
you and I skated barefoot
through the sand.
A strip of shoreline lay
traced
with our lazy steps
dipping into new ocean
without hesitation
or fear.
Today
I went down to the water
with a stone in my chest
and a long shadow
stretched out before me.
My shoes were on.
you and I skated barefoot
through the sand.
A strip of shoreline lay
traced
with our lazy steps
dipping into new ocean
without hesitation
or fear.
Today
I went down to the water
with a stone in my chest
and a long shadow
stretched out before me.
My shoes were on.
4-20-10
© 2010 - 2024 Gia-Seren
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I love this one. The imagery is great and the last line is my favorite part.
Is 'lie' in the right tense? I think it might be 'lay'...
Is 'lie' in the right tense? I think it might be 'lay'...